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Na pewno list? Wygląda mi to na notatkę dla współlokatora. Czyli list nieformalny (można używać skrótów).

Hello Jack. I'm going away for a weekend. I'm flying to Wroclaw to see my old friends. Can you please go to the library and give back the books which I borrowed last week?
Oh... I almost forgot, can you do some shopping at the grocery store?
I'll be back home on Friday. xoxo

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Tutaj identyczne polecenie ale z tą różnicą że ma napisać notkę xd http://zadane.pl/zadanie/2123884

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Hi Tom

I'll go away for the weekend to my home because my mother's had an accident and I must visit her in hospital. I want to remind you this weekend it's your turn to clean up our flat. If you can buy some food at grocery store because soon there will be nothing in the fridge. Please don't forget about it! I'll come back on Monday at morning. Leave the keys under the doormat 'cause I left my keys in locker at university.

See you!

XYZ


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Hello,
Amanda. I writing to you because my mother is very ill. As you know, she had a cancer since i was born and i must be with her.
So, in case of my absence I have a few requests that you would do until i came back.
First thing you must remember is flowers. They have high demand of water and you must gave they a little portion of water 3 times a day. Second thing you gonna remember is my dog Sara. As you know, she's a little doggy, so she didn't have to eat a lot. If you give her from time to time that old chicken from our fridge, will be good.
My last request is application to the school. I leave it on the table in the kitchen. You must gave that to this school, that i told to you, a few days ago. I will be very grateful.
Ah! And I almost forgot. Can you buy, a supply of milk? Don't ask why i need it...
So, this is probably all. I will leave our city in Friday at 9 o'clock and caming back in he sunday evening.
I hope, that you will can do it.
Cheers, Jacob.

 

To co napisał SanAndreas, w całości z poprawkami.

Hi Amanda,

I'm writing to you because my mother is very sick.

So, in case of my absence I have a few requests that you would do until I come back.

The first thing that you need to worry about are flowers.

They have high demand of water and you need to water them 3 times a day.

The second thing is a dog Sara.

As you know, she's little plump, so she doesn't have to eat a lot.

Would be okay if you give her a bit of chicken from the refrigerator.

I ask you to bring it to school, what I told you a few days ago. I will be very grateful.

Ah! I almost forgot. Can you buy 3 cartons of milk? Don't ask why I need it...

So, this is all. I'll leave city on Friday at 9 am and come back on sunday evening.
Cheers, Jacob.


PS: przed czasem wstawiamy at, przed dniem tygodnia on, przed miesiącem in.